"THE OPTION"

How much do you know me

To ask of Me

"What do you want from me?"

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"WAIT IN VAIN"

Would you have me dishonour my Femininity

By Asking You, to be My Man?

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"ATTENTION SPAN 6"

If you were a Carpenter

And I were a Lady

would I marry you anyway?

If you were a Carpenter

and I were a Lady

I would make you a King!

Done away with this Carpentry business.....

"ATTENTION SPAN 5"

Yuh si you...

Every time I see you

Yuh gwaan like yuh waan mi run come look yuh

Yuh si you...

Every time I see you

Yuh gwaan like yuh waan mi run come hug yuh

Yuh si you...

Every time I see you

Yuh gwaan like you waan mi run come kiss yuh

Yuh si you...

Every time I see you

Yuh gwaan like you waan mi run come love yuh

Yuh si you....

Every time I see you

Yuh gwaan like you waan mi run come tek yuh

Yuh si Yuuuu

Gwaan like yuh naah si mi...

"ATTENTION SPAN 4"

Nothing goes where it is not wanted,

I am here because you called,

Now!

Face your sorrow with a brave face

Because....

I Dig You!

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"ATTENTION SPAN 3"

If you think that I love you,

Then...

what are you afraid of?

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"ATTENTION SPAN 1"

Do you think that I want to be a Slave

to anything or anyone?

No...

I want to be a Patent Pender!

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"ATTENTION SPAN"

I don't have to finish

anything I start

Because,

Live goes on...

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"DATING ME"

YOU CANNOT MAKE ME YOUR QUEEN BY

COURTING ME LIKE A COMMONER,

LIVE UP TO THE THRONE AND BE MAJESTIC ABOUT IT!

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MACRO POETRY

MACRO POETRY: TO ZOOM IN ON A PARTICULAR DETAIL OFTEN IGNORED

MACRO POETRY_POST LITERATURE

Macro poetry is an idea I wish to explore as a form of creative writing.

It suggests the extraction of the most important graphic detail

within the story and have it magnified. Here are a few examples.

I have placed Macro Poetry as a sub heading under the now term

"Post Literature" forwarded by the Romanian Constantin Severin.

"NOTE OF LOVE"

IN A LETTA TO MY LOVA

I OPENED IT

WROTE IN IT

SENT IT TO HIM

WITH A STRAND OF HAIR.

"THE BATH"

Drenched with hot summer rain

White tub muddy water drained

Parched pipes drank the liquid stain.

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"YOU ALONE"

--- YOU ARE ONE OF A MINUTE FEW

WHO CAN'T BRAG ABOUT BEING WITH ME,

ALL THE OTHERS ARE LYING!

"TIMES"

How Dark is the day

when falsehood is the norm

and truth is a repulsion scorned upon.

"GOOD TASTE"

I recently discovered that "good taste"

is a matter of an experience to be had

and not a habitual way of life.